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Countdown to NaNo2011 – 2 weeks!

Two weeks from tomorrow, thousands of crazy totally sane, for sure, writers will start a month-long quest to write the next great frantic novel. (For the uninitiated, check out NaNoWriMo.org to learn what the heck I’m talking about.)

What are you doing to prepare for this year’s Month of Literary Abandon? From now until the end of November, I will be posting productivity tips every Monday to help you successfully complete your novel (or at least the first 50k words of it) this November.

(Full disclosure: I have never actually “won” NaNoWriMo. I have written a novel in a month though. More than once. Just not during November so it wasn’t all official and stuff.)

Now, on to this week’s tip:

NaNo Productivity Tip #1: Make a Plan

Maybe you’ve never used an outline before, you think all that planning ahead of time will kill your creativity when it comes to actually writing; that’s fine.

But.

If you want to write a novel in a month, unless you are superhuman, you will need to have some kind of plan. 50,000 words is a lot for 30 days of writing, and chances are, without a plan, you will end up with about 30,000 of those words being worthless. Okay, let’s be honest – even with a plan, that’s very possible, but alas, that is the nature of first drafts.

What kind of outline do you need? That’s completely up to you, but you know that old saying, “less is more”? In this case it’s completely wrong. You can’t over-plan for NaNoWriMo. At the very least, I suggest you know your basic plot, with a definite beginning, ending, and climax solidly in line.

You know what? Let’s take this one step further:

Get out a piece of paper and a pen. (Side note…I have this purple pen. I call it my Perfect Purple Plotting Pen. And now it’s time to plot out my NaNoNovel and I can’t find the pen. The horror!) Anyway, have your pen? Your paper? Good.

At the top of your paper, write a brief sentence about how your book starts. Then, at the bottom of the page, write a sentence about how it ends. Finally, pick a spot 2/3-3/4 of the way down the page and write down, briefly, what your climactic scene will look like.

This is your basic framework. Take some time and fill in the gaps, focusing on big-picture stuff only at this point. Try to fill every single line on the page with information. Unless, of course, you are using unlined paper. But you get the point.

What’s that you say? You filled all your lines but still have ideas?! That will happen once you get your creative juices flowing. What once seemed a daunting task is now behind you and you still have more to write. That’s fine – get another piece of paper and keep working. Before you know it, you will have a pretty detailed plan of action for your book. (Then, if you’re like me, you will write it all out again because you can’t stand the unorganized mess before you, but that’s not a necessary step.)

There you have it! A road-map to NaNoWriMo success. Keep your outline right next to your computer (or whatever you use to write) for the entire month of November, so it’s easy to reference if you feel like you get stuck. Can you get by without it? Sure. People do it all the time. But I promise it will be easier to get to that magical 50,000 words if you know where you are going.

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Dear Ones,

I decided last night that I need to read more Middle Grade books.

What MG books should I absolutely not miss?

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Fast Five…

I know, I know. I usually do Fast Five posts on Fridays, but I figure since I haven’t blogged in, like, for-ever, I can get away with doing one on this lovely Monday as well.

1. New!

If you’re reading this via email or an RSS feed, you can’t see it, but say hello to my shiny new website design! Actually, this is just a temporary design until I can get the real new design up but I like the nice autumn colors and clean look. Plus, the real new design depends on a friend doing me a favor, and since this friend is a busy, busy, buuusy man, I don’ t know when that is going to be. But I felt like I needed a change NOW, so I did a little tinkering. Also, for the first time ever, my Twitter page matches my website.

If you look around, you’ll notice I also put my writing page back up (with a NEW BOOK), added a review policy, changed my bio, and am now offering editing services. (Actually, I always was offering editing services-seeking out freelance clients the old-fashioned way…I just now decided to link it to my personal website is all.)

2. New-ish!

Meet my friend Kelli:

Kelli’s pretty darn amazing. Also, she’s a cosmetologist. So a few weeks ago when we were in Twin Falls for a few days, we decided I needed a haircut. Bad.

Let me back up.

A few YEARS ago, Kelli was thinking about maybe going to cosmetology school. Then we spent the week in Billings, MT for a series of concerts. Our first night there, she took this:

and turned it into this:

and then decided she really, really wanted to go to cosmetology school. So she did. And the next time we were in a hotel together (three weeks ago) she took this:

and turned it into this, much-much-improved version:

Did I mention Kelli rocks?

3. Needs-to-be-new

Sigh. I adore my teeny-tiny netbook. It is super portable and the small keyboard is just perfect for my tiny hands. Unfortunately, there was a major design flaw when they built these bad boys, and when you open the screen, it tweaks the cords that run through the hinges. Which means that after opening it enough times the screen starts to flicker. It gets worse and worse and worse until it is darn near unusable. Geek Husband has taken the machine apart twice to fix this problem for me, but the wires are just too far gone now for him to fix it a third time. Sigh.

4. big NEWs

After months of looking for a job that would allow Geek Husband, Baby Caveman, and me to move closer to the Geek inlaws, we have made a big decision: Geek Husband and I are starting our own business. GH will be doing freelance programming, and I will be taking care of the business and financial aspects (and some design if needed). We will start out by finding some projects that GH can moonlight with his current job, then stepping down the hours at his job, and finally branching out completely on our own.

Geek Husband is great with back-end web developing, as well as non-web software development. If you happen to know of anyone who needs a project done, send them our way!

5. Still sort-of-new Baby Caveman! 

See, I told you I have a baby:

L-R: Christa, Nate, Quinn, Me & Baby Caveman, Nic, Kelli, Jordon, Morgan

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Really Loves and Kinda Bugs

Really Loves…

~I really, really love that I have the best husband ever. Last Thursday, Baby Caveman and I abandoned him to go to Twin Falls, Idaho for four days to party it up with my buddies.  While I was gone, instead of sulking cause we left him or playing video games or whatever, Geek Husband cleaned the house. The. Entire. House. And trust me, it wasn’t a small task. I’d been sick for two weeks before leaving so I pretty much left the place a disaster. And then it was all pretty and sparkly when I got home.

And then, to make him even more awesome, when I mentioned that I wanted to go again in two weeks because half my buddies were sick and couldn’t hang for long, he didn’t even hesitate before saying, “yeah, we’ll work something out.”

Seriously, best. husband. EVER.

~I love THIS. So, so, so ridiculously proud of these boys. I was sitting at their show this past weekend thinking of how proud I am of them and their success. They’ve been working a LONG time for this. They are an inspiration.

Then, I looked down a few rows and saw their mom and dad. And I thought to myself, if I am this proud after having been a fan and friend for fourteen years, I can’t even fathom how Val and Spence must feel seeing their boys reach their dreams. It’s amazing and overwhelming.

~I love that I FINISHED THE FIRST DRAFT OF MY WORK-IN-PROGRESS LAST NIGHT!!!!

I have to admit, I was beginning to think I’d lost it. It’d been so long since I’d finished anything that I was letting the doubt creep in and convince me that I just couldn’t do it anymore. Well, take that, doubt. Because I finished!

It’s short. Like, really short. But it’s my first contemporary, which tend to run shorter, and I am one of those writers who has a tendency to write short and then add on during edits. I already have quite the list of things to work on; there’s still a long road before its really done, but for now: I FINISHED. Time to celebrate.

I don’t have a title yet, but for now, its working title is The Particular Sadness of Squirrels. That’s the second working title. You might be more familiar with its first: So97.

Kinda Bugs…

~I ordered some books from Barnes & Noble a couple weeks ago. They got lost in transit. I am still waiting for B&N/UPS/USPS to figure things out and get them to me. It’s not like I don’t have things to read, but I’d still like them to get here.

~Fall is here and the nights are getting cold. Now don’t get me wrong, I actually LOVE fall. I’m just kinda bugged because, well, TOO SHORT SUMMER!

~My mama had to have her golden retriever put down this weekend. Lucky was such a big lover of a dog. It was time and he was ready to go, but it was still really sad.

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Because children are the future…you can WIN!

America has the largest obesity problem in the world. We have the highest percentage of overweight and obese people out there (more than 60% of us fall into that category). Sadly, nearly half a million people in the US die every year due to illness that can be connected of obesity and poor nutrition.

Childhood obesity is a serious problem and it is on the rise.

The issue here isn’t laziness, but education. Many parents were not given the proper education and tools to make good decisions when it comes to their kids’ food.  We need to educate our children early to help them make good choices when it comes to food.

As teachers out there can attest, it isn’t easy to teach children something they find boring. A subject needs to be exciting enough for them to want to know more.  That’s where The Standards come in.

Meet The Standards: 

From left to right: Nic, (me), Jordon, (Kelli), Nathan, (Christa), Quinn, Morgan

The Standards are a critically-acclaimed vocal group made up of five brothers who know firsthand how proper nutrition affects us. This is Nicholas:

just ignore Jordon's creepy floating head

When he was ten years old, Nic was diagnosed with a cancerous tumor. On top of the medical attention he was getting, his parents turned their attention to what the family was eating. They really focused on changing their lifestyle and making sure they were making healthy choices. The doctors did great, but Nic is alive and well today largely due to the nutrition choices he and his parents have made.

The Standards have inspired thousands of children back east with their Music with a Message program, and now they want to take that message to the west! Schools want them to come teach and entertain their students, but budgets are tight. Schools are having budget cuts left and right, and they just can’t afford to bring the program to their students.

That’s where we come in.

The Standards have partnered with Kickstarter.com to bring their Inside Out Nutrition Tour to schools in the west at no charge to them. But they need our help! So please, listen to their message below, and then head to their project page and make a pledge. Our children thank you!

And now for the part where you can WIN!

Want the signed CD and DVD but can’t swing the full $75 pledge? How about I give them away instead? Here’s how this will work:

  1. Make a pledge.
  2. Come back here and tell me about your pledge.
  3. For every $10 you pledge, I will enter you in a drawing to win a signed, personalized copy of their new CD and DVD.
  4. If we reach our goal in time, I will pick a winner!
  5. When I see the boys again in two weeks, I will have the CD and DVD signed for our luck winner. Horray!
I know times are tight for a lot of people, but there is nothing more important than our kids, so please do what you can to help them get the information they need in a way they like.

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Really Loves and Kinda Bugs

Really Loves: 

Read For Relief, a literary-based auction set up to benefit those who have been so affected by Hurricane Irene. There’s a LOT of great stuff up there, people, so head on over and bid on some wonderful items. I’m talking signed ARCs and hardcovers, agent and editor critiques, author critiques.

And, well, if you want to win something donated by Yours Truly, you can find it here.

Pinterest

I love having a nice little go-to place to pin all the things I like and find inspiring. It’s like bookmarking, but much, much better!

The Country Bookshelf, my local independent bookstore (and the largest one in Montana to boot), where you will find this awesome anti-censorship display:

Kinda Bugs: 

*It is still fire season in Montana. There is still smoke in the air. It was so thick yesterday while I was out and about that I could barely see the Bridger Mountains (and the Bridger Mountains are practically on top of us here in Bozeman, people). I know I mentioned this one last week, but my sinuses still hate life, and therefore it still applies.

*We have a new downstairs neighbor. Surely he is a nice man, and he is quiet and all, BUT…he smokes a lot of pot. And his vents pretty much dump right into our house. It got so bad today that I actually had to take Baby Caveman outside because I was a little scared for his health.

*I went to Payless today hoping beyond hope that they would still have these cute little grey flats in stock. They don’t. Sigh.

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Monday Inspiration

I am ridiculously out of shape. Like, really ridiculously, y’all. I would like to say it’s because I just had a baby, but let’s face it: Baby Caveman is almost eight months old. And the problem didn’t start then anyway.

As a former athlete*, it’s really tough to be this out of shape. I am used to fitness and physique coming easily to me, and it’s daunting to think of the work that needs to go into getting myself back on track. Part of me is still struggling with the fact that I’m 27 years old, not 16, so my metabolism might work a little differently these days.

Anyway, Geek Husband and I have been trying to run regularly. We were actually doing quite well when the Bateman Plague hit our household and knocked me flat on my back for two weeks (somehow both Geek Husband and Baby Caveman bounced back way faster than me…might have something to do with that whole terribly-out-of-shape thing I’ve been talking about). But today I feel better, and darnit, we are doing this for REAL. We are starting an official Couch to 5K program just as soon as Jeopardy is over.

It is intimidating, but I can do it. And if ever I think I can’t, I need to just think about this quote I happened across today:

All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them. ~Walt Disney

*Anyone who says drill team (the high-kick and baton variety) is not athletic is welcome to come to my house, where I will promptly high-kick them in the face.

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Fast Five…

1. Bleck. I *think* I am finally winding down from being sick after two weeks. It was crazy: I woke up last Monday feeling unwell. Then I spent all last week achy and shaky and dizzy and nauseated. About Thursday Geek Husband got a cold. Then Saturday Baby Caveman got a cold (which was WAY more tragic than either or us being sick). Around Sunday I finally felt better. Then Monday I caught their cold. Lame.

2. September is such a beautiful month here in Montana. I am loving it and trying to enjoy the nice weather as much as I can. Because I know Montana and I know that I only have a limited time left before winter hits.

3. Poor Baby Caveman had to have a shot today. It was tragic, but he handled it like a champ. After it was done, I was holding him and he decided he wanted his daddy instead. So I gave him to Geek Husband. Then he wanted me. He switched parents four or five times before he settled down and we left. I think it hurt so he wanted comfort, but when he got to the other parent and it STILL hurt it threw him off so he decided to try again and again. It was cute.

4. So here’s the deal: I know I shouldn’t judge people. I know that. But still…if you post on Facebook or Twitter that you have NO time right after you post about all the TV shows you watch and among all the Facebook Game posts, well, then…I’m gonna judge you. Just sayin’. We all have the same amount of time, people. YOU choose how you use it.

5. 9/11/2001…I can’t believe it’s already been ten years since that horrible day. I have no words.

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Really Loves and Kinda Bugs

I saw this idea on the lovely Christina Cole’s blog. It looks cute and fun so I thought I’d give it a shot.

Really Love:

1. Lemon Custard ice cream from Baskin Robbins. They only make a limited amount of this stuff each year and if you don’t get there on time, you are out of luck. I’ve missed it for the last several years. So it’s okay that I went two days in a row, yes?

2. Jeopardy. Geek Husband and I are obsessed. We watch it every night. Seriously, Alex Tebek is like my wannabe best friend.

3. The fact that I found this book at Hastings today. Used. I’ve been thinking of buying it from Amazon.com for a few months now, but haven’t. Then I walk into our local bookstore today and there it is on the very front display! I grabbed it up. The man who checked me out told me that someone brought it in only two hours before. What are the chances?

Kinda Bugs:

1. Sick baby. :( Is there anything more sad? The Bateman Plague finally caught up with poor Baby Caveman. He’s been a poor pathetic little snot monster for the last couple days. I feel so bad for him!

2. Fire season in Montana. It is killing my sinuses. Stupid smoke.

3. Bozeman drivers. University just started up again, so there are a lot of new people on the streets here. I wish everyone had to take an Introductory to Driving class when they enroll here. It would make doing things like going to the store (okay, Baskin Robbins) much more pleasant for me.

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Things…

Things I was supposed to do today: 

1. Sweep and mop the floors.

2. Clean the bathroom.

Things I did today: 

1. Went to Baskin Robbins, because I heard they had their delightful lemon custard ice cream, which they almost never have. They did. It was delightful.

2. Disassembled our old, raggedy, worn-down couch to prepare it for reupholstering.

Things I am going to do now:

1. Massage out the cramps I have in my hands from pulling out about six billion upholstery staples.

2. Sit in the bathroom (because that’s where the humidifier and Vick’s vapor are and my sinuses are ka-illing me) and write like a maniac.

See? Dirty, worn-down, in DESPERATE need of some upholstery work.

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